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Bolt as Brass Cover WIP by SvbwayShayla Bolt as Brass Cover WIP by SvbwayShayla
After doing several days' worth of work, I have finally gotten this cover to a point where I feel I can upload it - if only to hopefully get some feedback on how to improve it further, because it's far from finished.

I would appreciate critiques/constructive criticism on this!
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TheOneVeyronian Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice work, I do like the general feel of the piece and I like the perspective and composition. I would say that the bridge on the left is a bit distorted, I would have personally had that bridge be a bit straighter, but that's pretty much the only piece of advice I could give you on this otherwise very good drawing. Great work, keep it up! :)
Icesturm Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2016  Student Digital Artist
I like the pose of the character :) One thing I notice is that the perspective of the bridge seams wrong, I'm not an expert in drawing though, so I don't know how to change it. The colors in the drawing were picked very well in my opinion :)
meiyue Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2016  Student General Artist
This is gorgeous! I really love the peaceful vibe you get from the calm colours and the wind softly blowing. The details in the town are really nice as well. I think what would make this image look a bit more visually appealing is if you had higher contrast, and maybe a bit more saturation in places. You have a sunset here, but the lighting is more as if it were overcast - with a sunset there are usually strong orange/yellow-y light and dark shadows. 

Also there seems to be two suns?

Anyway, I'm excited to see this finished! (feel free to show me when you're done ^_^) 
SvbwayShayla Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much for the comment!
I will try to take your advice into consideration :)
Yeah I couldn't get the lighting to be quite right - I kept making the shadows darker and so on but somehow it's still not quite working...
it's actually meant to be a sunrise, but I guess your point still stands.

And yes, there is two suns, that's intentional, the picture is set in a fantasy world.

Yes, sure thing, I will let you know! :) Thanks again :heart:
ureshii5h1t Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
nice job it looks pretty good to me. however if you want to improve I might be able to suggest a few things, one is I think the horizon looks a bit odd, mostly because of the bridge, something about it looks a little off. I think maybe you should lower the horizon a bit though that would probably be quite difficult. other than that I cant really see anything wrong with this. not bad keep it up! :) (Smile) 
SvbwayShayla Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much for the nice comment and the advice!
I see what you mean, I will try if I can change it :)
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August 8, 2016
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